22A Elevator Pitch No. 3

I did not receive much negative feedback from the last video. I tried to shorten the storyline at the beginning and get to point sooner. The feedback I got was encouraging and uplifting. Jamie explained that I was professional about it and understanding that I needed to just be software based. Luis explained that it would be good to make partnerships with these companies because that would increase my market share.

I did not change much between the second and the third pitch because my idea stayed the same. I do not think this message would of interest to anyone besides my prototypical customer. I definitely feel more comfortable, but I kinda winged the outro and it is noticeable. I enjoyed trying to get myself out there.

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  1. supertroller1000November 9, 2018 at 7:03 PM

    Hey Grant! I actually was in the same boat as you! I ended up using a very similar pitch as the last time and just added an extra little factor to make myself seem more personable. I gotta say though, the outfit helps! That hipster look is very popular amongst worship bands nowadays and it does make you more personable as well.

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  2. Jamie Goldstein's BlogNovember 11, 2018 at 11:45 AM

    Hey Grant! I think you did an awesome job on this assignment. You had done amazing jobs on your first two pitches, and thus you didn't have to change much going into this one. Overall though, you sounded a lot more concise, like you knew what you were saying, well-practices, cleaner, more polished, and more professional. I think you are a great public speaker and you can really draw the audiences attention. Overall, great job again!

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